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庞建志:每次遇到写景的作文,总有一种写不下去的感觉,老师也常常批评我写景很空洞。在座的同学,有的可能跟我一样,有的则是写景的高手,我想请大家谈一谈如何写景,可不要保守啊。李鑫:老师常说写景要按照一定的顺序来写。我每次写景都是想好了顺序再动笔的,自己也觉得层次蛮分明的,可是老师还是批评我写得呆板,不生动。单丽嫒:按照一定的顺序写景,只是写景的一个最基本的方法。要把景物写好,我看最关键的还是认真细致的观察。我曾经读过宋代画家文与可画竹子的故事。文与可为了画好竹子,曾经在骄阳下观察,在月夜里观察,在狂风中观察,在大雨中观察,最后完全做到了“胸有成竹”,他画起竹子来才那么得心应手。我想写景
Pang Ji-chih: Every time I encounter writing composition, there is always a feeling of writing can not go down, the teacher often criticizes me writing a vista. Some of my classmates here may be like me, while others are writers of landscape painting. I would like to invite everyone to talk about how to write a scene. Do not be conservative. Li Xin: Teachers often say that the scene must be written according to a certain order. Every time I write the scene are thinking of a good order and then writing, I think the level is quite clear, but the teacher still criticized me for writing dull, not vivid. Single Li 嫒: according to a certain order of the scene, just write the most basic method of the King. To write the scene, I think the most critical or careful observation. I once read the story of Song Dynasty painter and bamboo. Text and can draw a good bamboo, had observed in the sun, observed in the moonlight, observed in the wind, observed in heavy rain, and finally fully achieved “a well-thought out”, he painted bamboo to be so handy. I want to write scenery