学生一进入高中阶段首先接触的写作训练,应该就是记叙文。关于记叙文的写作有很多需要注意的方面,本文主要是结合我校高一新生《发现》作文的实际写作情况,来谈一谈记叙文若想写好,必须关注的方面:内容上,立意要深刻,并且选材不能老旧、低龄化;结构上,详略要得当;技巧上,记叙文中必需聚焦,放大细节;意识上,需凸显话题。这些方面落实不好,将直接导致文章层次不高,中心事件或人物不突出,缺少亮点等问题。 As soon as a student enters the upper secondary school, he or she should first be exposed as a narrative. There are many aspects that need to be paid attention to in the writing of narrative texts. This article is mainly based on the actual writing situation of the “discovery” composition of freshmen in our university. To talk about the narrative writing, we must pay attention to the following aspects: content, , And the material can not be old, younger age; structural, detailed to be properly; on the skills, the narrative must focus on, enlarge the details; awareness, the need to highlight the topic. These aspects are not well implemented and will directly lead to problems such as the low level of articles, the non-prominent central events or characters, and the lack of bright spots.