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假设你是李艳,请你给英国的朋友Susan写一封信。在信中,你告诉她五一劳动节要到了,你们要放3天的假。你准备和父母一起去海南旅游。你将用新买的照相机拍许多照片。你的英语口语不是很好,你想让她给你提一些提高口语的建议。
要求:1.在信中要体现提示的全部内容。2.正文40词左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
How is everything going with you?
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I hope you can keep healthy and happy every day. Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Yan
解题思路:
首先,要根据提示的内容,组织好写作的顺序。其次,要注意使用正确的时态。在描述将要发生的事情时,应使用一般将来时。最后,要注意把提示的全部内容体现在这封信中。
参考句型及短语:
travel to, take photos, Could you give me some ideas about...
学生习作:
Dear Susan,
How is everything going with you?
May Day is going to come.I am going to have a three-day holiday. I am travelling to Hainan with my parents. I amgoing to take photos with my new camera.I’m not good at spoken English. Could you give me some ideas about it?
I hope you can keep healthy and happy every day. Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Yan
点评:
本文内容完整,条理清晰,用词比较准确,体现了提示的全部内容,是一篇成功的习作。但有一处错误需要改正:May Day is going to come. 应改为May Day is coming. 在英语中go, come 等词用现在进行时表示将来的动作。参考范文:略
要求:1.在信中要体现提示的全部内容。2.正文40词左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Susan,
How is everything going with you?
___________________________________
___________________________________
___________________________________
___________________________________
I hope you can keep healthy and happy every day. Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Yan
解题思路:
首先,要根据提示的内容,组织好写作的顺序。其次,要注意使用正确的时态。在描述将要发生的事情时,应使用一般将来时。最后,要注意把提示的全部内容体现在这封信中。
参考句型及短语:
travel to, take photos, Could you give me some ideas about...
学生习作:
Dear Susan,
How is everything going with you?
May Day is going to come.I am going to have a three-day holiday. I am travelling to Hainan with my parents. I amgoing to take photos with my new camera.I’m not good at spoken English. Could you give me some ideas about it?
I hope you can keep healthy and happy every day. Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Yan
点评:
本文内容完整,条理清晰,用词比较准确,体现了提示的全部内容,是一篇成功的习作。但有一处错误需要改正:May Day is going to come. 应改为May Day is coming. 在英语中go, come 等词用现在进行时表示将来的动作。参考范文:略