【写作指导】好文章是改出来的。中学生初学写作,文笔稚嫩,思想肤浅。因此,更应字斟句酌,千锤百炼,精雕细琢。修改文章要从整体出发,应从锤炼主题到完善结构,从修正观点到取舍材料,从调整表达方式到推敲语言,有目的、有步骤地进行。一、修改主题,追求深刻主题是文章的灵魂,统摄全文各个部分。所以修改文章的第一步,要看主题是否合乎要求,是否正确、鲜明、深刻。在主题方面大家最常见的毛病就是结尾段未能深刻揭示事件的意义或是抒写出自我的感悟,使得文章立意肤浅。且看下面《让我后悔的一件事》作文的结尾段: Writing guide is a good article is changed out. Junior high school students begin writing, written writing immature, superficial thinking. Therefore, it should be carefully selected words, tempered, crafted. Article from the overall revised article should be from tempering the theme to improve the structure, from the revised point of view to choose materials, from adjusting the mode of expression to scrutiny language, purposeful, step by step. First, modify the theme, the pursuit of profound theme is the soul of the article, take the whole part of the text. Therefore, the first step to modify the article depends on whether the theme meets the requirements, whether it is correct, clear and profound. In the theme of the most common problems we are the end of the paragraph failed to reveal the significance of the incident or express their feelings, making the article deliberately superficial. And see the following “one thing I regret” the end of composition: