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2008年重庆市中考书面表达：
最近你校校园网上出现了一个英语帖子，意在了解同学们在体育技能、艺术特长和科技创新等方面的发展情况。请你以“夏宇”这一网名针对以上三方面回帖，内容包括以下要点： 1、你的特长；2、你发展特长所面临的困难；3、你有什么希望或建议。
要求： 1、词数： 80词左右；2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Xia Yu, 10:10 am, June 18
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Xia Yu, 10:10 am, June 18
I am Xiayu.I am tall and I like playing basketball. As I practise a lot, I am good at playing basketball. However, I have some difficulties in keeping practising it. First, our school only has 2 palygrounds and a lot of students play basketball after class. Second, since now I am going to senior high school, my parents and teachers hope I can spend less time playing basketball.
I suggest that another playgroud should be built in our school and I hope that teachers and parents can change their attitude to that.
点评：诸如as, however, first, second这些连接词的使用增加了这篇短文的条理性，使得描写更加紧凑，上下文连贯自然；hope 和suggest 后的宾语从句使用也比较正确。作者具有较好的书面表达能力。
One possible version:
I like sports and I’m good at playing basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I can’t sing well. I’m afraid of singing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.
相关链接：2009年武汉市九年级元月调研测试题书面表达
最近你校校园网上出现了一个英语帖子，意在了解同学们的课外活动、爱好及特长发展情况。请你以“李明”这一网名针对以上内容回帖，内容包括以下要点：
1、你的课外活动情况及爱好；
2、你的特长和发展特长所面临的困难；
3、你的希望或建议。
要求： 1、词数： 80词左右； 2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
After school I usually ...
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One possible version:
After school I usuallyhave some sports. I like playing basketball and I’m a good player.I like listening to music though I can’t sing well. I think I can speak English better than my classmates. But I find it hard to talk in English with others in school. I hope our school will start an English club. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I canhave more time to do what I’m interested in.
最近你校校园网上出现了一个英语帖子，意在了解同学们在体育技能、艺术特长和科技创新等方面的发展情况。请你以“夏宇”这一网名针对以上三方面回帖，内容包括以下要点： 1、你的特长；2、你发展特长所面临的困难；3、你有什么希望或建议。
要求： 1、词数： 80词左右；2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Xia Yu, 10:10 am, June 18
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满分作文：
Xia Yu, 10:10 am, June 18
I am Xiayu.I am tall and I like playing basketball. As I practise a lot, I am good at playing basketball. However, I have some difficulties in keeping practising it. First, our school only has 2 palygrounds and a lot of students play basketball after class. Second, since now I am going to senior high school, my parents and teachers hope I can spend less time playing basketball.
I suggest that another playgroud should be built in our school and I hope that teachers and parents can change their attitude to that.
点评：诸如as, however, first, second这些连接词的使用增加了这篇短文的条理性，使得描写更加紧凑，上下文连贯自然；hope 和suggest 后的宾语从句使用也比较正确。作者具有较好的书面表达能力。
One possible version:
I like sports and I’m good at playing basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I can’t sing well. I’m afraid of singing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.
相关链接：2009年武汉市九年级元月调研测试题书面表达
最近你校校园网上出现了一个英语帖子，意在了解同学们的课外活动、爱好及特长发展情况。请你以“李明”这一网名针对以上内容回帖，内容包括以下要点：
1、你的课外活动情况及爱好；
2、你的特长和发展特长所面临的困难；
3、你的希望或建议。
要求： 1、词数： 80词左右； 2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
After school I usually ...
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One possible version:
After school I usuallyhave some sports. I like playing basketball and I’m a good player.I like listening to music though I can’t sing well. I think I can speak English better than my classmates. But I find it hard to talk in English with others in school. I hope our school will start an English club. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I canhave more time to do what I’m interested in.