编者推荐:第七自然段“心生疑惑”是全文的过渡处,开启下文“家家户户都换上了防盗门”和“碰见的都是陌生的面孔,带着几许惊愕”——对上文“门,成了我幼年最美的记忆”作180度转弯——用“门,已成了一堵无形的墙,堵住了外面的世界,隔开了我们的心”点化文义!此文还需要升格:第一,充实类似“门上没有锁,夜间虚掩”的事例。第二,将卒章“不会忘记”的意思,改为“拆除无形的墙”的意思。标题宜实,应有“门”或“墙”的字眼。 Editor’s recommendation: The seventh paragraph of the natural “bewildered doubts” is the transition of the full text, open the following “every household has put on a security door” and “are met with strange faces, with a dash of surprise ” - For the above “door, it became my childhood’s most beautiful memory ” for a 180-degree turn - with “ door, has become an invisible wall, blocking the outside world, separating our The heart’s ”literalization!“ This article also needs to be upgraded: First, it is enriched with similar cases of ”no lock on the door and cover up at night“. Second, change the meaning of ”do not forget“ to ”demolition of invisible walls.“ The title should be true and should have the word ”door“ or ”wall".