此文侧重命题材料中“龙”字,拟出针砭特权思想的标题——见识独到。但是,从个别字中去找出“微言大义”立意,难免有“对材料把握不准”的风险;保险的做法是“整合材料,确立中心”。此文由“很响的一记耳光”过渡到“已被执行死刑”,说明古今对打击特权思想很有力度。但是,还需要升格,应将文章的重心放在“消除特权的措施”上。 This article focuses on the word “dragon” in the propositional material and proposes the title of the privilege ideology of the needle - a unique insight. However, from the individual words, it is difficult to avoid the risk of being “inaccurate to the material” to find out the concept of “profound sense of justice.” The practice of insurance is to “integrate materials and establish the center.” This article transitions from “a very loud slap in the face” to “has been executed,” illustrating that the ancient and modern days are very powerful in cracking down on privilege ideology. However, there is still a need for upgrading. The focus of the article should be on “measures to eliminate privilege.”