教学生涯中,接触了各种各样的习作题目和习作要求,其中大部分的习作要求里都有一条:写出真情实感。批阅了大量的学生习作,发现他们往往最缺失的就是那种最真的情感,学生总是喜欢舍近求远,且轻而易举地就放弃讲真话、抒真情,宁愿“冷酷无情”地简单描述事件或胡编乱造。那么在习作教学中,如何才能有效地引导学生更加关注真实的生活,如何才能使学生在文章中更好地表达自己的真情实感。笔者在教学实践活动中,尝试了一些有效策略和 During his teaching career, he came into contact with a wide range of assignments and assignments, most of which have one requirement in writing: to write out the true feelings. After reviewing a large number of students’ assignments and discovering that they are often the most missing is the kind of the most real emotion, students always like to go far and find it easy to give up telling the truth, expressing their true feelings and preferring a simple description of events Or make up trouble. So in the practice teaching, how to effectively guide students to pay more attention to real life, how to make students better express their true feelings in the article. I practice teaching activities, try some effective strategies and