参加《哈尔滨市志·商贸财政金融卷》的验收稿评议,很高兴。我认为这是一个很不错的稿子,观点正确,内容丰富,资料翔实,体裁完备,行文规范。经上次评议之后的认真修改,质量有了很大的提高,基本达到了验收标准。我想起三年前参加方志出版社组织的一次志稿审读会,当时我提出一个观点:审读有如审计。我说,审计是从财务角度对经济活动及其效益进行监督检查,直接目的是检查被审计单位财务制度的执行情况,及时发现并处理经济问题。当然,也要就被审计单位的财务工作提出建议。审读,则是要发现志稿的编写问题,提出修改意见,以进一步提高志书的编写质量。评议志稿和评论志书是不同的,评议志稿主要是找问题;评 I am pleased to participate in the acceptance review of “Harbin City Business Finance and Economics Volume”. I think this is a very good manuscript, correct point of view, rich in content, informative, genre complete, style of writing norms. After the last review seriously revised, the quality has been greatly improved, basically reached the acceptance criteria. I remember three years ago to participate in a Zhiwen Press organized a review of the draft, when I made a point: read like an audit. I said that auditing is to supervise and inspect economic activities and their benefits from a financial point of view. The direct purpose is to examine the implementation of the audited entity’s financial system and find out and handle economic problems in a timely manner. Of course, we also need to make suggestions on the financial work of the audited entity. Reading, it is necessary to find the issue of the preparation of Zhizhi, put forward amendments to further improve the quality of Zhi Shizhi. Evaluation of draft and commentary is different, commenting draft is mainly to find problems; evaluation