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最后的那个自然段出彩——不仅面上拓展,而且纵深开掘——彰显了“我”关注天下苍生情怀。此文还需要升格:在写“我”两次买梨的基础上,充实“我”的课堂面向市场的材料;删除标题中的“女”字。
The last section of the natural section is colorful - not only to expand, but also to dig deeply - to show “I” to pay attention to the feelings of the world. This article also needs to be upgraded: Based on the “My” two-time purchase of pears, enrich the “I” class of market-oriented materials; delete the “female” word in the title.