评委意见:在自己可掌控的范围内,力求让自己的文字如行云流水般流畅,让情节的发展张弛有度,波澜起伏,这才是对自己和放胆大赛的最大尊重,也才能最大限度地展现自我的能力。从这一点来说,尹文萱是聪明的。她选择的切入点很庸常——“趁现在去见你想见的人吧”。围绕着这一主题,她竟然设置了一个陌生的小旧楼。而所有的情节变化都是 Judge Opinion: Strive to make your own text flowing smoothly, smooth the development of the plot, ups and downs, this is the greatest respect for themselves and bold competition, but also to maximize the show Self-ability. From this point, Yin Wenxuan is clever. The point of entry she chooses is trivial - “Let’s see the person you want to see now”. Around this theme, she even set up a strange little old building. And all the plot changes are