清代文学家张潮在《幽梦影》中说:因雪想高士,因花想美人,因酒想侠客,因月想好友,因山水想得意诗文。作家之所以文思泉涌,一个重要的原因是善感。为了让学生贴近自然,感知自然,写好自然,特意以一场小雪为背景作文《雪》。阅读学生的作文,发现主要问题是:写景单薄,内容贫乏,缺乏感染力,不能引起读者的共鸣。因此,我设计了重读经典、修改习作、下水作文三个环节来解决写景不细 Zhang Chao, a Qing dynasty writer, said in Humor: Because Snow wants to be a nobleman, she wants to be a beautiful person because she wants to be a knight because she wants to be a good friend. One of the important reasons why writers are wenquan is goodness. In order to make students close to nature, natural perception, write nature, specifically to a snow as the background composition “snow.” Reading student essay, found that the main problems are: thin scenery, lack of content, lack of appeal, can not arouse the sympathy of readers. Therefore, I designed the reread classic, modify the practice, into the water three links to solve the writing is not fine