现在运用语法修辞知识具体地评改一篇判决书,作为运用语法修辞知识的一个例证。下面依次谈谈评改意见。① 事实部分的第一句话有三处不妥。一、“以……创造条件”,是用介词“以”组成的介词结构,加在动词“创造”之前,在全句中表示被告采取的犯罪手段。一般说,介词结构中的宾语(介词后面的部分),不宜过长。太长了则 Now use grammatical rhetorical knowledge to specifically review a verdict, as an example of the use of grammatical rhetorical knowledge. The following comments on the comments. ① The first sentence of the factual part has three problems. First, “to create conditions” is a prepositional structure consisting of the preposition “with”, adding before the “creation” of the verb that the criminal means taken by the defendant in the full sentence. In general, the object in the preposition structure (the part following the preposition) should not be too long. Too long