第四自然段“但是,就一粒种子而言,你是那么的崇高,那样的伟大。”此句中的“就……而言,”确立了赞美的角度,十分中肯,“但是”前用逗号,语意重点落在“崇高”“伟大”上--用语准确,突出主旨。但是,第三自然段第二行“小东西精灵一样”中的“精灵一样”应删除,第五行“小东西”宜改为“小精灵”。 The fourth paragraph of nature’s “However, in terms of a seed, you are so noble, that great.” “In this sentence,” as far as “...” is concerned, the establishment of the point of view of praise is very pertinent. “But before ” with a comma, semantic focus falls on “sublime ” “great” - the term is accurate, highlighting the subject. However, the second line of the third natural paragraph “elf-like” should be deleted, the fifth line “small things” should be changed to “elf”.