有些同学作文时材料贫乏,内容空洞,写人时就只是罗列评语式的人物特点;叙事时只说故事提要,概述过程;议论时只会将相同的意思翻来覆去地说。这样的文章,缺少细节,缺少深度。还有的学生作文材料平庸,内容雷同。由于材料缺乏真情实感,所以让人觉得是老生常谈,不爱读、不想读。 Some classmates are poorly written and empty in content. When writing, they are just a list of character features of the commentary type. When narratives are used, only the storyline is summarized and the process is outlined. When talking, only the same meaning is overturned. This article lacks details and lacks depth. There are other student writing materials that are mediocre and similar in content. Because of the lack of genuine feelings of materials, people feel that they are clichés, and do not like to read or want to read.