笔者前一段听了太原市并州路小学高艳老师以“老师,我想对您说”为题的一节高年级口头作文课,觉得很不错。所以说很不错,是觉得这样的作文课贴近学生的生活,课堂上学习气氛热烈;还因为接近义务教育小学语文教学大纲对小学生作文性质的论述。因为笔者对这节作文课有这样的感受, I heard the first paragraph of Taiyuan City and state high school primary school teacher Yan Yan to “teacher, I want to say to you,” a section of senior grade oral composition class, I feel very good. So that is very good, is that such a writing class close to the student life, warm atmosphere in the classroom learning; but also because of the compulsory education in primary language teaching syllabus on the nature of the essay on the composition of the essay. Because I have this feeling of writing lessons,