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青少年时期是人生最具感悟力和创造力的阶段,因而也是学习写诗的黄金时段。怎样才能在这诗般的年华写出好诗来呢?下面根据我本人写诗、读诗的体验来谈谈初学写诗者最易犯的几个毛病。贫血症。初学写诗的人最容易犯的一种毛病就是一般化,缺少色彩,不能感人。稿纸铺开,一行一行地写下去,乍看像一首诗,读起来也通顺,但就是味道不足,显得苍白无力。比如一个同学写了一首《母亲》的诗:啊,母亲,世界上最美丽的是你
Adolescence is the most emotional and creative stage of life, and therefore is also the prime time to learn to write poetry. How can we write good poem in this poetic year? Here are some mistakes we can make when we begin to write poet. Anemia. Beginners to write poetry is most likely to make a mistake is the generalization of the lack of color, can not be touching. Manuscript spread out, his party to write down, at first glance like a poem, read it fluently, but it is not enough flavor, appear pale and feeble. For example, a classmate wrote a poem “Mother”: ah, mother, the world’s most beautiful is you