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Exercise is good for our health. It can make sick people feel better. So the doctors always says to their patients： Do more exercise！
Doing exercise every day is the best. If don’t have much time to exercise much， you should do exercise at least three or four times a week. And what kind of exercise should we do？ That’s up to decide. You can play soccer， volleyball， tennis and so on. You can also spend time with your family or friends as you take exercise together. That is so fun.
It’s good for you to take exercise. Do it as soon as you are free！
简评：本文以锻炼身体为话题，多处巧妙运用本学期所学短语和句式表达观点及发表建议。作者开宗明义，点出锻炼的好处是强身健体。文章主体就锻炼的频率、时间、方式及乐趣进行了阐述，行文流畅，语言具有说服力。
（指导教师：丁喜娟）
Doing exercise every day is the best. If don’t have much time to exercise much， you should do exercise at least three or four times a week. And what kind of exercise should we do？ That’s up to decide. You can play soccer， volleyball， tennis and so on. You can also spend time with your family or friends as you take exercise together. That is so fun.
It’s good for you to take exercise. Do it as soon as you are free！
简评：本文以锻炼身体为话题，多处巧妙运用本学期所学短语和句式表达观点及发表建议。作者开宗明义，点出锻炼的好处是强身健体。文章主体就锻炼的频率、时间、方式及乐趣进行了阐述，行文流畅，语言具有说服力。
（指导教师：丁喜娟）