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假定英語课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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The other day， as I walked to school， I passed small construction area. It was not far away in my school. I notice a man bringing a bunch of things： shoes， blankets， some canned food， or clothing. Perhaps the items were gathered from his family and some of his friend. He started laying it down for people to take. Certainly， I was curious about what things would be going. So I rushed there after school. I saw that much of the items were taken by others. I have read lots of inspired stories of kindness. This is probably the sweetest act of kindness I’ve been witnessed so far.
2
In order to help foreign students promote their understanding of traditional Chinese culture， our school is going to provide a course naming Chinese Classic Poems Singing for them.
Any foreign student who is studying at our school and interested in Chinese poems are welcome to choose it. It would be a golden opportunity to enjoy the beautiful of Chinese poems. If interesting， do sign up for the course before the next Saturday. General speaking， to apply for the course， foreign students are required to hand an individual application form. They can be got either from the Students’ Union directly and be downloaded from the school website.
3
Corn， which was a useful plant that can be cooked in different way， is found all over the world today. In the West it is often boiled and eaten by salt and butter. In many places which is made into powder. The powder is then being mixed with water and other things， and make into different kinds of food. Corn is not only food that was taken to Europe. The tomato is the first that was taken to European country. This plant is so useful as corn， and it can be grown in places where it is very cold to grow rice.
4
Two boys sat on a beach talking happy while eating a watermelon. When they went away they leave the melon’s skins on the beach， making it very dirt. They didn’t want to take trouble to throw it into the dustbin though it was very near that they were sitting. They said that there would be anyone who should clean the rubbish. If everyone behave this way， the world will be the big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a world of diseases. Besides， it will be more too difficult for dustmen clean the world where we live.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
1
The other day， as I walked to school， I passed small construction area. It was not far away in my school. I notice a man bringing a bunch of things： shoes， blankets， some canned food， or clothing. Perhaps the items were gathered from his family and some of his friend. He started laying it down for people to take. Certainly， I was curious about what things would be going. So I rushed there after school. I saw that much of the items were taken by others. I have read lots of inspired stories of kindness. This is probably the sweetest act of kindness I’ve been witnessed so far.
2
In order to help foreign students promote their understanding of traditional Chinese culture， our school is going to provide a course naming Chinese Classic Poems Singing for them.
Any foreign student who is studying at our school and interested in Chinese poems are welcome to choose it. It would be a golden opportunity to enjoy the beautiful of Chinese poems. If interesting， do sign up for the course before the next Saturday. General speaking， to apply for the course， foreign students are required to hand an individual application form. They can be got either from the Students’ Union directly and be downloaded from the school website.
3
Corn， which was a useful plant that can be cooked in different way， is found all over the world today. In the West it is often boiled and eaten by salt and butter. In many places which is made into powder. The powder is then being mixed with water and other things， and make into different kinds of food. Corn is not only food that was taken to Europe. The tomato is the first that was taken to European country. This plant is so useful as corn， and it can be grown in places where it is very cold to grow rice.
4
Two boys sat on a beach talking happy while eating a watermelon. When they went away they leave the melon’s skins on the beach， making it very dirt. They didn’t want to take trouble to throw it into the dustbin though it was very near that they were sitting. They said that there would be anyone who should clean the rubbish. If everyone behave this way， the world will be the big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a world of diseases. Besides， it will be more too difficult for dustmen clean the world where we live.