很多同学在写作文时,要么由于早已想好了下一个情节的发展脉络,于是加紧速度心急地来个“三级跳”;要么由于思路断层而随意将情节片段连缀起来,却忘了进行适当的过渡,以致文章上下文欠缺连贯性。这些都造成文章情节过渡太快,严重点的甚至让人不知所云。情节过渡太快是学生写记叙文时表现得很普遍的一种现象。文章缺了一环少了一线,整个故事的情节就不连贯,读上去也不通顺。下面来看这样一个例子。 Many students in the writing of the text either have already thought of the development of the next plot, and then they have to step up and hurry to “triple jump!” Making the appropriate transition leads to a lack of coherence in the context of the article. All these have caused the plots of the articles to be transferred too quickly. Even serious ones are incomprehensible. The rapid transition of the plot is a phenomenon that is commonly seen when students write narratives. The article is missing one line and one line is missing. The plot of the entire story is incoherent and it is not easy to read. Let’s look at such an example.