一月的雪,别样白;七月的花,别样的红;十六岁的我,别样的新。(采用排比的手法开篇,引出“十六岁的我别样新”。一个巧妙的“新”字,是作者在向自己懵懂的过去告别,走进成熟的十六岁花季。)日月如梭,时光荏苒。岁月老人将一个懵懂无知的我带进了十六岁这个花一样的季节。十六岁的季节里,我仰望天空,多了一份欣慰;眺望远方,多了一份自信;垂足生活,多了一份干练;凝眸家人,多了一份珍惜。每天早晨起床,我总是小心翼翼地叠好被 January snow, do not white; July’s flowers, a different kind of red; I am 16 years old, a different kind of new. (The use of row approach began, leading to “a new ”, a clever “new ” is the author farewell to the ignorant of the past, into the mature 16-year-old season. As the sun and the moon flies, time 荏 苒. Years old man brought me into a 16-year-old flower-like season. Sixteen years of age, I look up to the sky, a more pleased; looking into the distance, a more confident; foot life, more than a capable; Gazing family, more than a treasure. I wake up every morning and I always fold it carefully