在各地的中考报告会上,我总喜欢给同学们打一个比方:考场作文如果没有“太阳”,总得有个“月亮”;没有“月亮”,总得有颗“星星”;没有“星星”,总得有只“萤火虫”。就篇章结构而言,出彩的方法就有不少。这里,老师结合2006年长沙市的中考阅卷情况,和同学们谈谈结构出新的技巧。 At all local examination reports, I always like to give an analogy to my classmates: if there is no “Sun” in the examination room composition, there must be a “Moon”; if there is no “Moon”, there must be a “Star”; there is no “Star”. There must always be only “fireflies.” As far as the structure of the text is concerned, there are quite a few ways to produce color. Here, the teacher combined with the situation of the middle school examination in Changsha in 2006, and talked with the students about the structure of new techniques.