“在荣誉面前应该继续发愤图强”一语,将文义提升到第二个层面——正确对待荣誉——前后的事例从不同的层面说“对待荣誉”。此文还需要升格:目前文中的事例同“荣誉”还存在距离;宜以“面对成绩”为题。 The phrase “in the face of honor should continue to show enthusiasm” should be raised to the second level - correct treatment of honor - before and after the case from a different level to say “treat honor”. This article also needs to be upgraded: There is still an existing case in the text with “honor”;