“小荷才露尖尖角,早有蜻蜓立上头”,特色文体佳作就是荷尖上的“蜻蜓”。怎样使它拥有清新脱俗、吸引眼球的倩影呢?一写出“五脏俱全的麻雀”:文体特征要鲜明。600字左右的文章,篇幅不长,但你既然选用了一种特色文体,就必须鲜明地体现它的文体特点,做到“麻雀虽小,五脏俱全”。下面这篇用剧本形式写的话题作文(话题是“机会”)在这方面就存在多处缺点,请阅读加了夹批的原文。 “Jiao He’s sharp-pointed horns have long since stood tall,” and the characteristic style of the masterpiece is the “蜻蜓” on the tip of the lotus. How to make it have a fresh and refined, eye-catching shadow? Write a “full house sparrow”: Stylistic characteristics should be clear. The article about 600 words is not long, but since you have chosen a special style, you must clearly reflect its stylistic features, so that “the sparrow is small, fully-equipped.” The following essay written in script form (the topic is “opportunity”) has many shortcomings in this respect. Please read the original text of the clip.