今早(删除)一出门,我就(便)闻到了一股浓郁而熟悉的香味。呀!原来是桂花又开了。可是,桂花不是已经谢了吗?怎么又开了?(以问题开头,引起读者阅读兴趣。很好)时间容不得我多想,我还有作业没有写完呢!(删除)我赶忙跑上前去,折了两枝,小心翼翼地捧(一个“捧”字用的很好)回了家。我轻轻地把花儿插在了花瓶里,白的瓶,绿的叶,黄的花,将桌子衬托得格外好看(改成:白色的花瓶,木色的桌子,将花儿衬 This morning (deleted) as soon as I went out, I (smell) a rich and familiar scent. It turned out to be osmanthus again. However, osmanthus is not already thank you? How to open? (To the beginning of the question, causing the reader to read the interest.) Good time I can not think about it, I still have not finished homework! (Delete) I quickly ran Go, folded two, carefully holding (a “holding ” word is used well) back home. I gently put the flowers in vases, white bottles, green leaves, yellow flowers, the table set off a particularly attractive (into: white vase, wooden table, the flower lining