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去学校给学生讲写作,他们常常提的问题是:写景状物,怎样才能写得生动?好难回答的问题。静思自己的写作实践和阅读美文的感觉,觉得有一点是可以表述清楚的,就是——借光,借着阳光来写景状物。一样即便是很美的东西,在阳光下也会显现出一种非凡的样貌来。一粒水珠、一片叶子、一棵树、一座山……观察它们在阳光下的样子,因为角度不同,光线不同,你眼中的事物便有了一种与众不同的美感,把它们描摹出来,你的文字也会如同被阳光照亮了一样,有了你所期望的生动与鲜活。这篇文章差不多都是放在阳光下写的,
To go to school to teach students writing, they often ask the question: writing scenery, how to write vivid? Hard to answer the question. Think one’s own writing practice and reading the feeling of the United States, feel one thing is clear, that is, by light, by the sun to write the scenery. Even the same beautiful things, in the sun will show an extraordinary appearance. A drop of water, a leaf, a tree, a mountain ... Observe what they look like under the sun, because of the difference in angle and light, the things in your eyes have a distinctive sense of beauty, and they are traced , Your text will be as bright as the sun, with the vivid and vivid you expect. Almost all of this article is written in the sun,