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编辑导语这是一篇游记。能够恰当使用比喻、拟人等修辞,使流畅的语言更加熠熠生辉,仿佛人在画中游一样。更难能可贵的是:透过这修辞,能看到一个充满童真童趣的孩童及她眼中的世界。去年暑假,我和妈妈一起去了电影《卧虎藏龙》的拍摄点——翡翠谷。翡翠谷坐落在山谷之中,山上是茂密的竹林。风一吹,竹子在山中摇摆,好像在演奏一首动听的歌谣。我和妈妈沿着山谷之间的小路,慢慢向前游览。前面缓缓冒出了一个“大调色盘”。我连忙加快脚步,原来是一个漂亮的池塘,它的名字叫作翡翠池。我一看,这个池子的主色是绿色的,有蓝
Editor’s Guide This is a travelogue. Appropriate use of metaphors, anthropomorphic rhetoric, so smooth language more sparkling, as if people in the middle of painting the same. Even more commendable is: through this rhetoric, can see a child full of childlike innocence and the world in her eyes. Last summer, I went to the movie “Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon” with my mother - the Emerald Valley. Emerald valley is located in the valley, the mountain is a dense bamboo forest. The wind blows, bamboo swaying in the mountains, as if playing a nice song. My mother and I walked slowly along the path between the valleys. Slowly appeared in front of a “large palette ”. I quickly speed up the pace, turned out to be a beautiful pond, its name is Emerald Pool. I see, the main color of this pond is green, blue