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近几年广东高考基础写作命题形式以文字提纲的形式出现。它的特点就是所给材料含有的信息比较多，但写作要求是只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。单一地用某种句型，文章就显得平淡乏味。如果在这五句话中所包含的句子结构能做到多样，那么，这篇文章显得就很漂亮了。
要让一篇文章的句式多样，其实并不难。在写作时，我们常用到的有以下几种方法：
一、运用同位语
此方法常用于介绍人或事物。
[例1]李敏是个女孩子，今年18岁, 她在光华中学学习，她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。
[一般]Li Ming is a girl. She is 18. She is my neighbour and my best friend. She is studying in Guanghua Middle School.
[高级]Li Ming, a girl of 18, my neighbour and my best friend, is studying in Guanghua Middle School.
[运用]用同位法整合下面的句子。
1. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province. It is the cultural and economical center of Guangdong Province.
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2. Zhang Hai is male. He is 23 years old. He graduated from Hunan Normal University last year.
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二、运用并列句
常用的并列连词有and, but, or, otherwise, nor, so, yet, however, for, as well as, both...and, not only...but also, either...or, neither...nor, (and)then, since等。
[例2]他不喜欢音乐，也不喜欢运动。
[一般]He doesn’t like music. He doesn’t like sports, either.
[高级]He likes neither music nor sports.
[例3]我不喜欢他，他很自私。
[一般]I don’t like him. He is selfish.
[高级]I don’t like him, for he is selfish.
[运用]用连接词整合下列句子。
3. He works hard himself. He encourages us to work hard, too.
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4. These glasses are very expensive. Please be careful with them.
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三、运用短语
根据具体情况我们可以用现在分词、过去分词，介词短语、不定式短语等。
[例4]我很惊讶，一切进展得那么顺利。
[一般]I was surprised. Everything went on very well.
[高级]To my surprise, everything went on well.
[例5]她回到舞厅。他寻找丢失的项链。
[一般]She went back. She wanted to find her lost necklace.
[高级]She went back to find her lost necklace.
[例6]故事是用简单的英语写的，很受英语初学者的欢迎。
[一般]The stories are written in simple English. They are popular with English beginners
[高级]Written in simple English, the stories are popular with English beginners.
[运用]用短语整合句子
5.He was ill. He didn’tgo to school.
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6. The man is singing a song. He is my brother.
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四、运用从句
最常用的便是状语从句、主语从句、宾语从句和定语从句。
[例7]废水被直接排放河里，河水被严重污染。
[一般]Waste water is directly let into the river. The river is seriously polluted.
[高级]The river is seriously polluted because waste water is directly let into the river.
[例8]他病得很重，这让我着急。
[一般]He was seriously ill. It made me worried.
[高级]That he was seriously ill made me worried.
He was seriously ill, which made me worried.
[运用]用从句整合下列句子。
7. He never lost a game. I was really astonished.
________________________________________________________________________
8. Li Hua is my classmate. His English is very good.
________________________________________________________________________
需要注意的是，我们在写作时，要注意不要一味地追求用复杂句型，能简则简，能用短语，就不用从句。在句式多样的前提下，尽量做到精练。
[例9]我到家后马上给他打电话。
[一般]After I got home, I called him at once.
[较好]After getting home, I called him at once.
[例10]我正在餐桌旁吃饭，一个人朝我走了过来，那个人戴着一顶黑帽子。
[复杂]I was eating at the table when a man who was wearing a black hat came up to me.
[简明] When I was eating at the table, a man wearing a black hat came up to me.
[综合练习]下面是广东2008年高考英语试题基础写作的内容，请用上面所讲的四种方法整合句子。
Shooting was originally a means of survival. It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896. None were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport had just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games. Now it has 17 shooting events.
参考答案
1. Guangzhou, the capital and the cultural and economical center of Guangdong Province, is located in the middle of Guangdong Province.
2. Zhang Hai , male, 23 years old, graduated from Hunan Normal University last year.
3. He not only works hard himself but also encourages us to work hard.
4. Please be careful with the glasses , for they are very expensive.
5. Being ill, he didn’t go to school.
6. The man who is singing a song is my brother.
7. I was really astonished that he never lost a game.
8. Li Hua is my classmate, whose English is very good.
综合练习：Shooting, which was originally a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
责任编校 蒋小青
要让一篇文章的句式多样，其实并不难。在写作时，我们常用到的有以下几种方法：
一、运用同位语
此方法常用于介绍人或事物。
[例1]李敏是个女孩子，今年18岁, 她在光华中学学习，她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。
[一般]Li Ming is a girl. She is 18. She is my neighbour and my best friend. She is studying in Guanghua Middle School.
[高级]Li Ming, a girl of 18, my neighbour and my best friend, is studying in Guanghua Middle School.
[运用]用同位法整合下面的句子。
1. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province. It is the cultural and economical center of Guangdong Province.
________________________________________________________________________
2. Zhang Hai is male. He is 23 years old. He graduated from Hunan Normal University last year.
________________________________________________________________________
二、运用并列句
常用的并列连词有and, but, or, otherwise, nor, so, yet, however, for, as well as, both...and, not only...but also, either...or, neither...nor, (and)then, since等。
[例2]他不喜欢音乐，也不喜欢运动。
[一般]He doesn’t like music. He doesn’t like sports, either.
[高级]He likes neither music nor sports.
[例3]我不喜欢他，他很自私。
[一般]I don’t like him. He is selfish.
[高级]I don’t like him, for he is selfish.
[运用]用连接词整合下列句子。
3. He works hard himself. He encourages us to work hard, too.
________________________________________________________________________
4. These glasses are very expensive. Please be careful with them.
________________________________________________________________________
三、运用短语
根据具体情况我们可以用现在分词、过去分词，介词短语、不定式短语等。
[例4]我很惊讶，一切进展得那么顺利。
[一般]I was surprised. Everything went on very well.
[高级]To my surprise, everything went on well.
[例5]她回到舞厅。他寻找丢失的项链。
[一般]She went back. She wanted to find her lost necklace.
[高级]She went back to find her lost necklace.
[例6]故事是用简单的英语写的，很受英语初学者的欢迎。
[一般]The stories are written in simple English. They are popular with English beginners
[高级]Written in simple English, the stories are popular with English beginners.
[运用]用短语整合句子
5.He was ill. He didn’tgo to school.
________________________________________________________________________
6. The man is singing a song. He is my brother.
________________________________________________________________________
四、运用从句
最常用的便是状语从句、主语从句、宾语从句和定语从句。
[例7]废水被直接排放河里，河水被严重污染。
[一般]Waste water is directly let into the river. The river is seriously polluted.
[高级]The river is seriously polluted because waste water is directly let into the river.
[例8]他病得很重，这让我着急。
[一般]He was seriously ill. It made me worried.
[高级]That he was seriously ill made me worried.
He was seriously ill, which made me worried.
[运用]用从句整合下列句子。
7. He never lost a game. I was really astonished.
________________________________________________________________________
8. Li Hua is my classmate. His English is very good.
________________________________________________________________________
需要注意的是，我们在写作时，要注意不要一味地追求用复杂句型，能简则简，能用短语，就不用从句。在句式多样的前提下，尽量做到精练。
[例9]我到家后马上给他打电话。
[一般]After I got home, I called him at once.
[较好]After getting home, I called him at once.
[例10]我正在餐桌旁吃饭，一个人朝我走了过来，那个人戴着一顶黑帽子。
[复杂]I was eating at the table when a man who was wearing a black hat came up to me.
[简明] When I was eating at the table, a man wearing a black hat came up to me.
[综合练习]下面是广东2008年高考英语试题基础写作的内容，请用上面所讲的四种方法整合句子。
Shooting was originally a means of survival. It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896. None were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport had just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games. Now it has 17 shooting events.
参考答案
1. Guangzhou, the capital and the cultural and economical center of Guangdong Province, is located in the middle of Guangdong Province.
2. Zhang Hai , male, 23 years old, graduated from Hunan Normal University last year.
3. He not only works hard himself but also encourages us to work hard.
4. Please be careful with the glasses , for they are very expensive.
5. Being ill, he didn’t go to school.
6. The man who is singing a song is my brother.
7. I was really astonished that he never lost a game.
8. Li Hua is my classmate, whose English is very good.
综合练习：Shooting, which was originally a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
责任编校 蒋小青