近年来,媒体、教师以及很多关心中学生写作的人们对学生在中高考作文中的“空洞”和“矫情”表示忧虑和反感,而这种“空洞”与“矫情”一方面跟自身阅读趣味有关,阅读时不加辨别,常被充满诗意与抒情的“美文”所迷惑,另一方面是因为学生缺乏将生活中人与事内化为一种情愫的能力。这样学生写出来的文章,优作都是文采飞扬、辞藻艳丽,然而较多是空洞无物、泛泛抒情,更有不少虚情假意的文章出现。如何扭转这一局面,细细梳理下来,我们发现这个时代的学生在写作技巧上已经远远超越过 In recent years, the media, teachers and many people who care about the writing of middle school students express their worries and resentments about the “empty” and “hypocritical” students in their college entrance essay compositions. However, such “empty” and “hypocritical” “On the one hand, it is related to one’s own reading pleasure, unrecognized when reading, often confused by poetic and lyric” beauty ", on the other hand, because of the lack of students to turn people and things in life into a kind of affection ability. Written by such students articles, excellent work is literary flying, rhetoric gorgeous, but more are empty nothing, general lyric, there are many articles of hypocrisy intended. How to reverse this situation, carefully combing down, we found that students in this era in writing skills has been far beyond