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许多同学写议论文总喜欢堆砌事例,而不加分析,观点仍然是观点,材料只是材料,像油和水两相分离,互不交融。堆砌事例常见有以下两类:A:“自古英雄出寒家”。范仲淹两岁丧父,随母改嫁,小时读书时连粥都吃不上;司马光也出身贫寒;明代宋濂虽为大学士,家中却一贫如洗;举世闻名的荷兰画家凡高也一文不名,生活上常常靠着弟弟接济;居里夫人刚满十岁就外出打工;前苏联伟大作家高尔基曾经是个流浪儿……可见贫困也是一笔财富。B:庸俗近了,幸福却远了。沸沸扬扬的“郭美美事件”是这样令人心寒。她从小爱慕虚荣,不断在网上炫富,引来关注。然而她的钱竟是靠
Many students write argumentative papers that always like to pile things up without analysis. The point of view is still the point of view. Materials are just materials, and they are separated from each other like oil and water. Stacking examples are common in the following two categories: A: “heroes out of cold homes”. Fan Zhongyan lost his father at the age of two and remarried with his mother. He could not even eat porridge at hours of study. Sima Guang was also of poor quality. Although Ming Song dynasty was a college student, his family was poor; the world-famous Dutch painter Van Gogh was also unfamous, often relying on life. The younger brother gave aid; Madame Curie went out to work when she was ten years old; Gorky, a great writer of the former Soviet Union, was once a street kid. It can be seen that poverty is also a fortune. B: Vulgarity is near, happiness is far away. The tumultuous “Guo Meimei incident” is so chilling. She loved vanity since she was a child and kept showing off her wealth on the Internet. However, her money was actually