【设计说明】现行苏教版小学语文高年级教材中的很多习作练习都提出“内容具体、感情真实”这一要求,但是如何写具体,却没有更为有效的建议和措施,教师的指导也因此常常得不到落实。教材中有许多典型课文,它们在遣词造句、谋篇布局上有许多闪光点,为学生学习写作提供了绝佳的范例。苏教版小学语文五年级上册《莫高窟》一文是一篇说明文,文章结构清晰、叙述具体、表达有序,是学生模仿习作的好例子。依托这个例子, 【Design】 The current version of the primary language teaching in the Soviet version of the primary school a lot of practice exercises have put forward the “content specific, real feelings,” this request, but how to write specific, but no more effective suggestions and measures, teachers Guidance is therefore often not be implemented. There are many typical texts in the textbooks. They have lots of bright spots in creating sentences and creating layouts, which provide excellent examples for students to study writing. Supiao version of primary school Chinese fifth grade volume “Mogao Grottoes” is an article, the article clearly structured, narrative specific, orderly, is a good example of student imitation. Relying on this example,