1953年春,我从义县师范学校毕业后,被分配到阜新县第五区哈朋小学任教员,安排我住在本村老贫农滕家。滕家的二女儿滕越在外地读书,一次,她回家时带回一篇作文——《我敬佩的老师》,让我帮她修改。我看后略加改动,并写出了“感情真挚,语言朴实亲切,令人回味无穷”的评语。她笑了,腼腆地问了一句:“你喜欢这篇作文吗?” In the spring of 1953, after graduating from Yixian Normal School, I was assigned as a teacher at Hapeng Primary School in the Fifth District of Fuxin County and arranged for me to live in the old poor peasant family in my village. Teng’s second daughter, Teng Yue, was studying in the field. Once, when she came home, she brought back an essay entitled “Teacher I admire” and asked me to help her to amend it. I see a slight change after the move, and wrote a “sincere feelings, simple and cordial language, it is memorable ” comments. She laughed, shyly asked: “Do you like this essay?”