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作文课上我们经常看到这样的情景:有的学生双手托腮,紧皱眉头不会写;有的学生大脑一片空白,无从下手不想写;有的学生写得平平淡淡、干干巴巴;有的学生谈作文色变……如何把学生视为“苦差”的作文变成“乐事”呢?蜜蜂每酿一斤蜜,需飞行45万公里,要在100万朵鲜花上辛勤采蜜;提炼出人丹那么大的镭,需8吨重的矿石。同样的道理,要写出好作文,也如“采蜜”、“炼镭”一样,应掌握丰富的素材,引导学生采集原材料,
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