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【栏目要求】
1. 将学生习作根据中考分值给出成绩； 2. 在应该修改的地方划线并标注序号；
3. 根据所标序号进行修改并说明修改的理由； 4. 给学生习作点评<优点与不足>；
5. 请点评名师提供简历一份，包括：学校、职务、 职称、荣誉、教研教学成果、照片一张。
来稿请寄： 430079 华中师范大学外国语学院《中学生英语》 杂志社 收
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How to Become a Good Student
As a good student， we should keep good habit① and ways in learning all the subjects. First of all， we should prepare for lessons before class. It’s very important for us to listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. After class， we should review the lessons and finish our homework on time. It is good to study in pairs or groups.
If you want to make a great achievements②， you should go on exploring some new ways of learning. Therefore， summing up experience， drawing lessons and working hard are of great importance to us. For example， in learning English， besides we do more listening， speaking， reading and writing. We should practice to speak③ it in and out of class and remember new words， grammar as many and much as possible. If you have problems， you’d better ask for teachers’ help. On the other hand， remember to take more exercises④ and enough sleep a day. When you get tired， you’d better relax yourself.
I hope all these will be very helpful to us. Do you want to have a try？
湖北省十堰市郧县杨溪中学九（2）班 余青云
1. 优点：
该同学英语基本功相对扎实，整篇文章内容详实，语言流畅，时态、语态正确，词句运用得当，值得一读。条件状语从句运用自如。某些重点句式、词组和固定搭配掌握的比较熟练。
2. 需要修改的地方：
① habits应改为复数habits；
② achievements应该为单数形式achievement；
③ to speak应该为 speaking，因为practice后接动名词形式；
④ exercises应改为exercise， 该词作“锻炼、运动”讲时为不可数名词。
3. 评分：
按中考满分15的标准，本文修改前可得14分。
1. 将学生习作根据中考分值给出成绩； 2. 在应该修改的地方划线并标注序号；
3. 根据所标序号进行修改并说明修改的理由； 4. 给学生习作点评<优点与不足>；
5. 请点评名师提供简历一份，包括：学校、职务、 职称、荣誉、教研教学成果、照片一张。
来稿请寄： 430079 华中师范大学外国语学院《中学生英语》 杂志社 收
本 期 点 评 名 师
How to Become a Good Student
As a good student， we should keep good habit① and ways in learning all the subjects. First of all， we should prepare for lessons before class. It’s very important for us to listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. After class， we should review the lessons and finish our homework on time. It is good to study in pairs or groups.
If you want to make a great achievements②， you should go on exploring some new ways of learning. Therefore， summing up experience， drawing lessons and working hard are of great importance to us. For example， in learning English， besides we do more listening， speaking， reading and writing. We should practice to speak③ it in and out of class and remember new words， grammar as many and much as possible. If you have problems， you’d better ask for teachers’ help. On the other hand， remember to take more exercises④ and enough sleep a day. When you get tired， you’d better relax yourself.
I hope all these will be very helpful to us. Do you want to have a try？
湖北省十堰市郧县杨溪中学九（2）班 余青云
1. 优点：
该同学英语基本功相对扎实，整篇文章内容详实，语言流畅，时态、语态正确，词句运用得当，值得一读。条件状语从句运用自如。某些重点句式、词组和固定搭配掌握的比较熟练。
2. 需要修改的地方：
① habits应改为复数habits；
② achievements应该为单数形式achievement；
③ to speak应该为 speaking，因为practice后接动名词形式；
④ exercises应改为exercise， 该词作“锻炼、运动”讲时为不可数名词。
3. 评分：
按中考满分15的标准，本文修改前可得14分。