新编九年义务教育教材初中语文第一册《〈咏柳〉赏析》一文,是通过对唐代诗人贺知章《咏柳》诗的赏析,来提高学生阅读欣赏能力的。全文由语言上的分析进而转到艺术上的鉴赏,由表及里,层层深入,可谓欣赏作品类的佳作了。可是,编者对文中两处词语的注释,我认为有欠妥之处,现提出来,以求教于方家。 The article entitled “Liu Liu” in the first edition of the nine-year compulsory education teaching material for junior high school is to enhance students’ reading ability through appreciation of the Tang poet He Zhizhang’s poem “Xu Liu.” The full text from the analysis of language and then transferred to the appreciation of the art, from the table and the inside, in-depth, can be described as appreciate the work of the class of good. However, the editor’s comment on the two words in the text, I think there is something wrong with it, and it is proposed to seek advice from Fang.