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2011年江苏高考英语科考试说明已新鲜出炉，其中对书面表达作出了明確的规定，要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。其中，高级词汇和高级句型结构的使用以及连贯性用语的使用对争取英语高考高分作文有很大作用。下面笔者将结合自身多年高三毕业班的教学经验，谈谈如何运用高级词汇、高级句型结构、连贯性用语等来提升文章层次，写出高分作文。
一、使用高级词汇和短语
从评分标准可以看出，高考书面表达提倡与鼓励考生使用高级词汇。所谓使用高级词汇是指使用书面语词汇而非口语词汇。因为高考作文是书面表达而非口语对话，故考生在高考书面表达中应尽可能使用书面语词汇以提高文章的表达效果，提升文章的层次。
二、使用高级句型和结构
高考书面表达评分标准指出，如果是因为尽力使用较复杂结构所致的个别小错误，可以予以忽略，照样评出高分。因此我们应大胆使用高级句型和结构，增加文章的亮点，从而提高文章的层次。
1.使用形容词短语作状语
一般表达：Thomas Edison was born in America. He was a great scientist and inventor.高级表达：Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.
2.使用介词短语作状语
一般表达：He doesn’t give us answer immediately. Instead he encourages us to think by ourselves.高级表达：Instead of giving us answer immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves.
3.使用with的复合结构
一般表达：Our school lies at the foot of a mountain. There is a river flowing in front of it.高级表达：At the foot of mountain lies our school with a river flowing in front of it.
4.使用同位语
一般表达：I can’t help being moved by its author Helen Keller. She is an ordinary but great American woman.高级表达：I can’t help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.
5.使用分词短语
一般表达：The reconstruction will result in broader path and thus it will make the pavilion outdated.高级表达：The reconstruction will result in broader path, making the pavilion outdated.
6.使用独立结构
一般表达：The weather was fine, so a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.高级表达：The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
7.使用被动句式
一般表达：The local government sho uld take effective measures to solve the problem.高级表达：Effective measures should be taken by the local government to solve the problem.
8.使用倒装结构
一般表达：Though the pavilion is old, it is the witness of the school history.高级表达：Old as the pavilion is, it is the witness of the school history.
9.使用强调句型
一般表达：Study is our main task.高级表达：It is study that is our main task.
10.使用虚拟语气
一般表达：Obviously, it is time for us to take some measures to solve this problem.高级表达：Obviously, it is time that we took some measures to solve this problem.
11.使用复合句如定语从句等
一般表达：They lost the game. It made us very disappointed.高级表达：They lost the game, which made us very disappointed.
12.使用成语、谚语或名人名言
As the proverb goes, “A bird in hand is worth two in the bush .” As everyone knows, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”
三、恰当使用连贯性用语
评分标准指出，书面表达应该注意上下文的连贯性，并能有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。因此，在高考作文中我们要恰当地使用过渡性用语，唯有这样文章才能如行云流水，流畅自然。除了句子与句子之间的衔接以外，还要注意段落之间的衔接过渡。
四、文章应注意分段，以求层次清晰
一般文章都包括开头、正文以及结尾三部分，如此才会使文章层次分明，意群清晰。因此我们在高考作文中一定要注意分段，千万不能一段到底，让阅卷老师云里雾里，不知所云。
五、认真书写，卷面整洁
书面表达属于人工阅卷，所以阅卷者的主观印象非常重要，清晰工整的英文书写显然能给阅卷老师留下一个良好的印象。
综上所述，考生在平时如能持之以恒地加强上述各方面的训练，并在高考英语作文中加以发挥运用，那么高考书面表达取得高分应是水到渠成，瓜熟蒂落之事。
（作者单位：江苏省高邮市界首高级中学）
一、使用高级词汇和短语
从评分标准可以看出，高考书面表达提倡与鼓励考生使用高级词汇。所谓使用高级词汇是指使用书面语词汇而非口语词汇。因为高考作文是书面表达而非口语对话，故考生在高考书面表达中应尽可能使用书面语词汇以提高文章的表达效果，提升文章的层次。
二、使用高级句型和结构
高考书面表达评分标准指出，如果是因为尽力使用较复杂结构所致的个别小错误，可以予以忽略，照样评出高分。因此我们应大胆使用高级句型和结构，增加文章的亮点，从而提高文章的层次。
1.使用形容词短语作状语
一般表达：Thomas Edison was born in America. He was a great scientist and inventor.高级表达：Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.
2.使用介词短语作状语
一般表达：He doesn’t give us answer immediately. Instead he encourages us to think by ourselves.高级表达：Instead of giving us answer immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves.
3.使用with的复合结构
一般表达：Our school lies at the foot of a mountain. There is a river flowing in front of it.高级表达：At the foot of mountain lies our school with a river flowing in front of it.
4.使用同位语
一般表达：I can’t help being moved by its author Helen Keller. She is an ordinary but great American woman.高级表达：I can’t help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.
5.使用分词短语
一般表达：The reconstruction will result in broader path and thus it will make the pavilion outdated.高级表达：The reconstruction will result in broader path, making the pavilion outdated.
6.使用独立结构
一般表达：The weather was fine, so a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.高级表达：The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
7.使用被动句式
一般表达：The local government sho uld take effective measures to solve the problem.高级表达：Effective measures should be taken by the local government to solve the problem.
8.使用倒装结构
一般表达：Though the pavilion is old, it is the witness of the school history.高级表达：Old as the pavilion is, it is the witness of the school history.
9.使用强调句型
一般表达：Study is our main task.高级表达：It is study that is our main task.
10.使用虚拟语气
一般表达：Obviously, it is time for us to take some measures to solve this problem.高级表达：Obviously, it is time that we took some measures to solve this problem.
11.使用复合句如定语从句等
一般表达：They lost the game. It made us very disappointed.高级表达：They lost the game, which made us very disappointed.
12.使用成语、谚语或名人名言
As the proverb goes, “A bird in hand is worth two in the bush .” As everyone knows, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”
三、恰当使用连贯性用语
评分标准指出，书面表达应该注意上下文的连贯性，并能有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。因此，在高考作文中我们要恰当地使用过渡性用语，唯有这样文章才能如行云流水，流畅自然。除了句子与句子之间的衔接以外，还要注意段落之间的衔接过渡。
四、文章应注意分段，以求层次清晰
一般文章都包括开头、正文以及结尾三部分，如此才会使文章层次分明，意群清晰。因此我们在高考作文中一定要注意分段，千万不能一段到底，让阅卷老师云里雾里，不知所云。
五、认真书写，卷面整洁
书面表达属于人工阅卷，所以阅卷者的主观印象非常重要，清晰工整的英文书写显然能给阅卷老师留下一个良好的印象。
综上所述，考生在平时如能持之以恒地加强上述各方面的训练，并在高考英语作文中加以发挥运用，那么高考书面表达取得高分应是水到渠成，瓜熟蒂落之事。
（作者单位：江苏省高邮市界首高级中学）