阅读学员们的消息习作，感到有一个问题：乍一看，主题，取材，事例，似乎也不错，可是仔细一推敲，或是新闻要素残缺，或是材料单薄，或是主题肤浅，甚至偏颇。这些习作徒具消息的外形，距离～条真正的消息还有不少差距。这就好比是一个没有熟透的果子，吃的人，咬一Q，又酸又 At first glance, theme, material, and examples seem to be good. However, careful scrutiny, incomplete news elements, thin materials, or even superficial topics may even lead to a problem. These exercises only have the appearance of the message, there are still many gaps from the real news. This is like a non-cooked fruit, eat, bite a Q, sour again