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审题指南针:本次习作要求表达一个孩子的肺腑之言。在每位孩子心中都有千言万语,但选材应从全新的角度出发,才能激发读者的阅读欲望。可以是对父母的建议,可以是对父母的感恩之情,可以是歉意或悔过、理解等等。切记一定要真情流露,才能打动读者,让读者产生共鸣!(韦艳)佳作展示台:“爸爸妈妈,我需要你们的爱,你们快点回来吧……”我千百次在心里默默地说,每次眼泪都会像断了线的珠子一样不争气地落下来。爸爸妈妈,你们知道吗?我是多么需要你们的爱啊!自从你们
Compiled subject Compass: This exercise requires the expression of a child’s heartfelt words. In every child’s heart has a thousand words, but the material selection should be from a new perspective, in order to stimulate the reader’s reading desire. It can be advice to parents, it can be a sense of gratitude to parents, apologies or repentance, understanding and so on. Remember that the truth must be revealed in order to impress the reader so that readers have resonance! (Wei Yan) masterpiece display: “Mom and Dad, I need your love, you hurry back ... ...” I have hundreds of times in my heart silently To say that every tear will fall like a broken string of beads as disappointingly. Mom and Dad, did you know that? How much I need your love! Since you