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从属(subordination)是造句成文的重要手段.学习英语写作的学生学会正确使用从属成分(从句、短语等),将大大有助于写作水平的提高.从属成分运用得当,可使句子写得重点突出(emphasis)、简洁(economy)而且概念表达清楚(clarity).下面拟从这个角度谈谈学生作文中的两种典型的不良倾向.克服这些倾向的过程,无疑也就是提高写作水平的过程. 一种倾向是不会使用从属成分(lack of subordination),而是把好多结构雷同的简单句(choppy sentences)堆在一起.这种情况常出现在
Subordination is an important means of making sentences and writing. Students who learn English writing learn to correctly use subordinate components (subject clauses, phrases, etc.) will greatly contribute to the improvement of the level of writing. Appropriate use of subordinate components can make sentences more focused. (emphasis), conciseness, and clarity of concept. The following is intended to talk about two typical bad tendencies in student writing from this perspective. The process of overcoming these tendencies is undoubtedly the process of raising the level of writing. The tendency is not to use lacks of subordination, but to pile together many structurally identical simple sentences (choppy sentences).