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师:《苏州园林》的结尾只有一句话:“可以说的当然不止以上写的这些,不再多写了。”有同学提出,相对于点明苏州园林重要地位的开头和突出苏州园林“图画美”的主体部分,结尾未免简单了点,仓促了点。老师也注意到了这个情况。那如果换成你来写结尾,你会怎么写?(学生思考后发言)生:我认为结尾应该点一下题。我会写:“这就是景色如画,堪称各地园林标本的苏州园林。”师:不但点了题,还和开头相呼应了。
Teacher: “Suzhou Garden” is only one sentence at the end: “Of course, more than the above written, no more. ” Some students proposed, relative to point out the important position of Suzhou Gardens at the beginning and highlight Suzhou Gardens “Picture Beauty ” the main part, the end is a bit simple, hastened the point. The teacher also noticed this situation. What would you write if you changed it to the end of your writing? (After the student thinks and speaks) 生生: I think the end should be the same. I will write: “This is a picturesque garden called Suzhou gardens. ” Division: not only point the question, but also echoed the beginning.