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【失误原文】同桌印象(标题不够抢眼。)贾鹏飞步入初中后,我结交了不少新朋友,其中有一位便是我的同桌——程宇。(开篇点题,简洁入文。)程宇今年十五岁,走路有点快,说话嗓门儿大,给人印象一般般。我是个顽皮之人,因而也从不把他放在眼里。(外貌描写过于简单,没能抓住同桌的与众不同之处,来展示其独特的个性!)然而,程宇十分幽默。记得有一次,语文老师让他和几位同学上台板演几个词语,他快步向讲台走去。结果他轻松搞定,跑下讲台时还不忘朝我们飞媚眼。不好!当经过李晔身旁时,李晔不小心把墨水溅到了
[Error] original text at the same table (title is not eye-catching.) Jia Pengfei into junior high school, I made a lot of new friends, one of which is my desk - Cheng Yu. (Beginning questions, concise entry.) Cheng-yu 15-year-old this year, walking a little faster, speak louder, giving the impression of general. I am a naughty person, so I never look into it. (Appearance description is too simple, did not seize the same table at the same place, to showcase its unique personality!) However, Cheng Yu very humorous. I remember once, the language teacher asked him and several classmates on the stage to play a few words, he walked quickly walked to the podium. As a result, he could easily handle it and did not forget to fly toward us when he ran the podium. Bad! When Li Ye side, Li Ye accidentally splashed ink