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平日里,学生们在写作文时,有时为了写长些,叙述时前后重复,结果写出来的作文拉杂拖沓,令人啼笑皆非;有些学生认为,作文要具体生动就得尽量多用好词句,结果好词不达意句用了一串又一串,空口号喊了一遍又一遍,内容却空洞无味。今天教一学生写体育活动的文章,为了凑字数学生写道:上体育课时,老师教我们学小猫叫,老师教我们学小狗叫,老师叫我们学大公鸡叫,老师教我们学小猴叫,老师教我们学老虎叫,老师教我们学狮子叫,老师教我们学大白鹅叫,老师教我们学大灰狼叫……读毕,我真是笑声不止。
Weekdays, when students are writing essay, sometimes in order to write longer, repeated when the narrative, the results of writing essay drawn mixed, it is ridiculous; some students think that the composition should be vivid as much as possible with good words, the result is good The word does not convey a sentence with string after string of empty slogans shout again and again, but the content is empty and tasteless. Today teach a student to write an article on physical activity, in order to collect words Students wrote: on physical education, the teacher taught us to learn kitten called, the teacher taught us to learn puppy called, the teacher told us to learn big cock, the teacher taught us to learn small The monkey called, the teacher taught us to learn the tiger called, the teacher taught us to learn the lion call, the teacher taught us to learn the big white goose called, the teacher taught us to learn the wolf called ...... completes, I really laughter.