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朋友拿来一份《租房协议书》,请我看看有什么问题。按照协议书的写作规范,此文问题还真不少。试结合原文修改如下。原稿:租房协议书经×××、×××、×××、×××四人(以下称甲方)与房主×××(以下称乙方)友好协商,乙方同意甲方以9600元人民币一次性支付租用××××路×号×××室,租期自二○○二年六月二十五日起至二○○二年十二月二十五日止,共六个月,并预交600元人民币押金,退房时,如无遗留问题,如数退还。甲方承诺:1、睦邻友好,爱护室内一切设施和家俱电器。
Friends brought a “rental agreement”, please see what’s wrong with me. In accordance with the norms of writing writing, this article really a lot of problems. Try combining the original revised as follows. Manuscripts: The agreement for renting is fraudulently negotiated with the owners ××× (hereinafter referred to as Party B) by the parties of ×××, ×××, ××× and ××× (hereinafter referred to as Party A) and Party B agrees that Party A shall, at a price of 9,600 yuan Renminbi shall be leased for one-time rent ×××× 路 × 号 ××× room, the lease term is from June 25, 2002 to December 25, 2002, a total of six Month, and pre-paid 600 yuan deposit, check-out, such as without problems, refundable. Party A promises: 1, good neighborliness and friendship, care of all indoor facilities and furniture appliances.