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书面表达是高考试题中分值较高(25分)、拉分档次较大的一个题型,因此,写好书面表达非常重要,这已为历年的高考所证实。然而,高考书面表达要想取得高分却并非易事,近几年的书面表达评分标准除了要求考生语言准确、要点齐全之外,还要求考生能使用较高级词汇和较复杂句式,并对行文的连贯性作了专门的要求:“第一档(差):(1--5分)……缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。第三档(适当):(11--15分)……应用简单的语句连接成分,使全文内容连贯。第五档(很好):(21—25分)……有效地使用了语句的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”由此可见,能否恰当的使用连接词,增加行文的衔接与连贯,会直接影响到考生书面表达的档次。
连接词作为语篇的逻辑纽带,主要在句子之间,甚至段落之间起着承上启下的桥梁作用,使句子、段落和篇章保持逻辑上的关联和语义上的连贯。从形式上看,连接词可以分为三类:
(1)连词和副词。如:and, but, so, for, although, even if, when, while, as, yet, then, however, anyway等;
(2) 一些介词短语。如:on the contrary, as a result, in addition, in spite of等;
(3) 分句。如:that is to say, what’s more等。连接词通常可以用在句首,以便和前面的句子相连接,也可以用于句中,尤其是在较长的复杂句中。作为上下文的连接纽带,连接词能以多种方式贯通和建立前后句子间语义上的连系。
下面为大家提供一些常用的连接词,供大家参考使用。
一、表示平行、对等或选择关系的连接词
and, both…and, as well as, as well, neither…nor, or ,either…or等。
例I’m sure you will like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. (2005北京卷)
I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period.(2004全国卷Ⅰ)
二、表示转折关系的连接词
but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand 等。
例However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well-known at home and abroad.(2005全国卷Ⅲ)
I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, I’ll show you around and take you to some places of interest.(2004全国卷Ⅱ)
However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.(2004江苏卷)
三、 表示因果关系的连接词
for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to 等。
例Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?(2005湖北卷)
Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike.(2005北京卷)
So it should remain where it is. (2005全国卷Ⅲ)
四、表示时间顺序的连接词
at first, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as , the next moment等。
例As high school students, firstly, we are expected to be neatly dressed when at school. Secondly, it must be made clear that we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over. Lastly, when you are walking on the road, please remember to keep to the right, and if you want to go to school by bike, you must have a bicycle permit.(2005安徽卷)
After hearing what I said, my neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediately. (2004广东卷)
五、表示空间顺序的连接词
on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of…, on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/center of 等。
例On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building--our library. (NMET1999)
六、表示解释说明的连接词
that is(to say),in other words, such as, for example, for instance, and so on, in my opinion等。
例In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.(2005湖北卷)
On that day, more than 60,000 people, such as teachers, students and workers, came to the fair from all over the country.(2005天津卷)
In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students.(2004上海春季卷)
七、表示递进关系的连接词
what’smore/worse, what’s better, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all,not only… but also等。
例 Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station.(2005山东卷)
What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. (2005全国卷Ⅲ)
Besides, is there any time for shopping?(2005全国卷Ⅰ)
八、表示总结的连接词
in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole, to sum up等。
例 In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load.(NMET 2001)
In a word, the wall newspaper should be interesting, helpful and meaningful.(2004上海卷)
综上所述,连接词在语篇上所起的衔接作用是非常明显的。如果不使用连接词,写出来的文章只不过是一些杂乱无章、随意堆砌的句子。下面是一篇学生习作,较好地使用了连接词。
Travelling
Travelling is a very good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature and the special character of other cities. You can breathe fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. In doing so, you will forget your tiredness and trouble and build up your health.
But sometimes, travelling is not an enjoyable thing. For example, the weather can be changeable. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while travelling. The worst thing is that you may have your money stolen and you may have an injury. All these are terrible things which can happen to a tourist.
Therefore, when you are going on a trip, you must prepare yourself carefully. Firstly, you must have clear information about the weather. Secondly, you should choose a good companion so that you can help each other. Thirdly, you must be careful everywhere and try to avoid accidents. If you do these, you will surely enjoy your travel.
这篇文章如果不使用连接词,读起来就显得意义不连贯,缺乏条理性;恰当地使用连接词就显得逻辑性强,结构紧凑,意义贯通,因而读起来就通顺流畅。当然,连接词也不可滥用,否则就有画蛇添足之嫌。
总之,连接词是语篇的重要连贯纽带,在写作过程中起着举足轻重的作用,同学们不可忽视。
连接词作为语篇的逻辑纽带,主要在句子之间,甚至段落之间起着承上启下的桥梁作用,使句子、段落和篇章保持逻辑上的关联和语义上的连贯。从形式上看,连接词可以分为三类:
(1)连词和副词。如:and, but, so, for, although, even if, when, while, as, yet, then, however, anyway等;
(2) 一些介词短语。如:on the contrary, as a result, in addition, in spite of等;
(3) 分句。如:that is to say, what’s more等。连接词通常可以用在句首,以便和前面的句子相连接,也可以用于句中,尤其是在较长的复杂句中。作为上下文的连接纽带,连接词能以多种方式贯通和建立前后句子间语义上的连系。
下面为大家提供一些常用的连接词,供大家参考使用。
一、表示平行、对等或选择关系的连接词
and, both…and, as well as, as well, neither…nor, or ,either…or等。
例I’m sure you will like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. (2005北京卷)
I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period.(2004全国卷Ⅰ)
二、表示转折关系的连接词
but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand 等。
例However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well-known at home and abroad.(2005全国卷Ⅲ)
I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, I’ll show you around and take you to some places of interest.(2004全国卷Ⅱ)
However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.(2004江苏卷)
三、 表示因果关系的连接词
for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to 等。
例Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?(2005湖北卷)
Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike.(2005北京卷)
So it should remain where it is. (2005全国卷Ⅲ)
四、表示时间顺序的连接词
at first, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as , the next moment等。
例As high school students, firstly, we are expected to be neatly dressed when at school. Secondly, it must be made clear that we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over. Lastly, when you are walking on the road, please remember to keep to the right, and if you want to go to school by bike, you must have a bicycle permit.(2005安徽卷)
After hearing what I said, my neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediately. (2004广东卷)
五、表示空间顺序的连接词
on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of…, on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/center of 等。
例On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building--our library. (NMET1999)
六、表示解释说明的连接词
that is(to say),in other words, such as, for example, for instance, and so on, in my opinion等。
例In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.(2005湖北卷)
On that day, more than 60,000 people, such as teachers, students and workers, came to the fair from all over the country.(2005天津卷)
In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students.(2004上海春季卷)
七、表示递进关系的连接词
what’smore/worse, what’s better, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all,not only… but also等。
例 Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station.(2005山东卷)
What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. (2005全国卷Ⅲ)
Besides, is there any time for shopping?(2005全国卷Ⅰ)
八、表示总结的连接词
in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole, to sum up等。
例 In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load.(NMET 2001)
In a word, the wall newspaper should be interesting, helpful and meaningful.(2004上海卷)
综上所述,连接词在语篇上所起的衔接作用是非常明显的。如果不使用连接词,写出来的文章只不过是一些杂乱无章、随意堆砌的句子。下面是一篇学生习作,较好地使用了连接词。
Travelling
Travelling is a very good activity. When you are fed up with your work and study, and when you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature and the special character of other cities. You can breathe fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. In doing so, you will forget your tiredness and trouble and build up your health.
But sometimes, travelling is not an enjoyable thing. For example, the weather can be changeable. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while travelling. The worst thing is that you may have your money stolen and you may have an injury. All these are terrible things which can happen to a tourist.
Therefore, when you are going on a trip, you must prepare yourself carefully. Firstly, you must have clear information about the weather. Secondly, you should choose a good companion so that you can help each other. Thirdly, you must be careful everywhere and try to avoid accidents. If you do these, you will surely enjoy your travel.
这篇文章如果不使用连接词,读起来就显得意义不连贯,缺乏条理性;恰当地使用连接词就显得逻辑性强,结构紧凑,意义贯通,因而读起来就通顺流畅。当然,连接词也不可滥用,否则就有画蛇添足之嫌。
总之,连接词是语篇的重要连贯纽带,在写作过程中起着举足轻重的作用,同学们不可忽视。