有些同学作文时,往往习惯于粗略叙述事情的发展过程,写得过于简单,不具体。例如有一次,我镇防疫站的医生来校给同学们打防疫针。事后,我以“打针”为题让同学们作文。一位同学的作文写得就不太具体,他是这样写的:【诊断、治疗】这篇作文虽然层次清楚,但内容空洞。我们知道,事总是由人去做的。人是有感情的,内心世界的活动必然对发生的事做出相应的反应,显之于神态,表之于语言,付 Some students are often accustomed to writing a rough description of the development of things, writing too simple, not specific. For example, once, my town epidemic prevention station doctors came to school to fight the students vaccination needle. Afterwards, I let the students write essays on the topic of “Injections”. A student’s essay is not written specifically, he wrote like this: [diagnosis, treatment] Although the essay level clear, but the content is empty. We know that things are always done by people. Human beings have feelings, and the activities of the inner world must react accordingly to the events that have taken place. They manifest themselves in demeanor, language and pay