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小朋友，当你们自己生日的时候，你们有什么特别的感觉呢？很多人到了他们生日的时候，心情会特别地好，因为那天会收到令人惊喜的生日礼物。我们就把这种期待的心情，写在作文开始的地方吧。我们第一段的建议开头句就是：Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it.
大家在生日的时候，一定有什么特别的庆祝活动吧，像吃蛋糕、唱生日快乐歌、吹蜡烛等等， 虽然，每年的庆祝模式可能都很像，但是当时间快到庆祝我们生日的时候，大家一定都很期待吧。我们第二段的建议开头句就是：When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home.
作文题目是令人惊喜的生日派对，那么一定有什么地方跟平常不一样，别卖关子了，在文章的最后，赶快把答案公布出来吧。我们第三段的建议开头句就是：And then， things changed completely.
下面让我们来看看彼得的文章：
Tips写作技巧：
第一段：Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it.
第二段：When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home.
第三段：And then， things changed completely.
Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it. In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said， "Today is my birthday， don't forget it！"At school， I got many gifts and cards from my classmates and had a lot of fun. But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.
When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home. When I open the door，there wasn't anybody in the house. There was only a note that said， "Coming home late tonight， mum and dad." I try to call them but there was no answer. I was so shocked，do they forget my birthday？ How could this be！ I was so sad that I couldn't eat anything. I just did my homework and waited for them.
And then， things changed completely. It was about time for dinner， my mother called and told me to go to the restaurant near our house. When I got there I couldn't believed my eyes. Everybody was there： my parents， my relatives， my friends and even my classmates. There was so many gifts and a big cake. What a surprising birthday party！We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever.
今天是我的生日，真是令人兴奋。早上，我在餐桌上放了一张纸条给妈妈：别忘了今天是我的生日。在学校我收到很多生日礼物和卡片，也和同学玩得很开心。但是，我还是很期待放学后的生日派对。
放学的时间一到，我迫不及待地回到家。但当我打开家门，家里却一个人都没有，只有一张纸条上面写着：晚一点回来，爸妈留。我试着联络他们，可是却找不到人。当下，我整个傻眼。他们该不会真的忘记今天是我的生日了吧，怎么会这样呢？我难过得吃不下饭，只好去做作业，然后等他们回家。
最后事情有了180度的转变，大约是晚餐时间，妈妈打电话，叫我到家附近的餐厅去，到了那之后，我简直不敢相信我的眼睛，大家都在：我爸妈、亲朋好友甚至还有同学们。不仅有很多的礼物，还有一个大蛋糕。真是个惊喜的生日派对！我们玩得很开心，这真是最棒的一次生日派对。
大家在生日的时候，一定有什么特别的庆祝活动吧，像吃蛋糕、唱生日快乐歌、吹蜡烛等等， 虽然，每年的庆祝模式可能都很像，但是当时间快到庆祝我们生日的时候，大家一定都很期待吧。我们第二段的建议开头句就是：When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home.
作文题目是令人惊喜的生日派对，那么一定有什么地方跟平常不一样，别卖关子了，在文章的最后，赶快把答案公布出来吧。我们第三段的建议开头句就是：And then， things changed completely.
下面让我们来看看彼得的文章：
Tips写作技巧：
第一段：Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it.
第二段：When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home.
第三段：And then， things changed completely.
Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it. In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said， "Today is my birthday， don't forget it！"At school， I got many gifts and cards from my classmates and had a lot of fun. But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.
When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home. When I open the door，there wasn't anybody in the house. There was only a note that said， "Coming home late tonight， mum and dad." I try to call them but there was no answer. I was so shocked，do they forget my birthday？ How could this be！ I was so sad that I couldn't eat anything. I just did my homework and waited for them.
And then， things changed completely. It was about time for dinner， my mother called and told me to go to the restaurant near our house. When I got there I couldn't believed my eyes. Everybody was there： my parents， my relatives， my friends and even my classmates. There was so many gifts and a big cake. What a surprising birthday party！We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever.
今天是我的生日，真是令人兴奋。早上，我在餐桌上放了一张纸条给妈妈：别忘了今天是我的生日。在学校我收到很多生日礼物和卡片，也和同学玩得很开心。但是，我还是很期待放学后的生日派对。
放学的时间一到，我迫不及待地回到家。但当我打开家门，家里却一个人都没有，只有一张纸条上面写着：晚一点回来，爸妈留。我试着联络他们，可是却找不到人。当下，我整个傻眼。他们该不会真的忘记今天是我的生日了吧，怎么会这样呢？我难过得吃不下饭，只好去做作业，然后等他们回家。
最后事情有了180度的转变，大约是晚餐时间，妈妈打电话，叫我到家附近的餐厅去，到了那之后，我简直不敢相信我的眼睛，大家都在：我爸妈、亲朋好友甚至还有同学们。不仅有很多的礼物，还有一个大蛋糕。真是个惊喜的生日派对！我们玩得很开心，这真是最棒的一次生日派对。