开篇导语经过将近一年的语文学习,同学们的写作能力有了明显提高。在翻阅老师批改的作文时,细心的你应该会发现这样的评语:“语言表达欠准确”“多余的文字可删除”“这样表达更简洁”等等。其实,老师批语中指出的就是同学们写作中语言欠简明的问题。今天,周老师就带着大家一起来聊聊“用语简明,准确表达”这个话题。名篇选段【片段一】初夏的一个上午,我去河边散步,看见河湾的岸边一个小男孩和小 Beginning introductory After nearly a year of language learning, students’ writing ability has been significantly improved. When you read through the composition of the teacher’s amendment, careful you should find such comments: “language is not accurate ” “excess text can be deleted ” “to express more concise ” and so on. In fact, the teacher pointed out that the language is less concise writing in writing. Today, Teacher Zhou brought everyone together to talk about the topic of concise language and accurate expression. Episode electoral section [] A piece of early summer morning, I went to the river walk, saw the river bank a small boy and small