一、不一致不一致包括主谓不一致、数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。例:When one have money,he can do what he want to do. 剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而have应为has。同理,want应为wants。改为:Once one has money,he can do what he wants(to do). 二、修饰语错位例:I believe I can do it well and l will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末。三、悬垂修饰语所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。 First, the inconsistent inconsistency includes subject-predicate inconsistency, number inconsistency, tense inconsistency and pronoun disparity. Example: When one have money, he can do what he wants to do. Analysis: One is the third-person singular, so should be has. In the same way, won should be wants. Change to: Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do). Second, the modifier is misplaced: I believe I can do it well and l will better know the world outside the campus. Analysis: Better position, Should be placed at the end of the sentence. 3. Hanging Modifiers The so-called drape modifiers mean that the logical relationship between the sentence at the beginning of the sentence and the sentence behind is confusing.