在写作过程中,许多学生一味地追求语言的华丽,词藻的耀眼,并且讲究文学的工整,结构的精巧,然而,他所写出的文章就是不能打动人心,引起读者的共鸣,像观看一盆精雕细刻的假花,看上去美丽,却毫无生命力。但是,他们并未意识到这一点,还常常为自己的文章自鸣得意,欣赏了再欣赏,并拣出其中的 In the process of writing, many students blindly pursue the flourish of language, the dazzling of words, and pay attention to the neatness of literature and the exquisite structure. However, the articles he writes cannot touch people’s hearts and arouse the reader’s resonance, like watching a pot of essence. The carved fake flowers look beautiful but have no vitality. However, they were not aware of this, and they often smacked their own articles, appreciated them, and picked them out.