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如今我们的报纸上,相当多的消息不大引人爱看。究其原因,固然内容是决定因素,但也有些是写得太马虎,把“好菜”做坏了。凡属此种情况的,一多半的毛病出在导语身上:或违背写作规范,或不合逻辑,或语句欠通……。精彩的导语是引领读者看下去的好向导,病导语呢?当然只会起相反的作用了!为了引起大家对改进导语写作的兴趣,我们特邀高级编辑严介生同志,在本刊“品脉诊断”栏目开设《请为病导语“品脉”》专题。办法是,每期由他选择若干有疵点的导语公布出来,请大家来“品脉诊断”:毛病在哪?怎样修改?写好后寄给我们,交栏目主持人评述,然后择优发表。本期公布的病导语有如下4条:
Nowadays, quite a bit of news in our newspapers is not attractive. The reason, although the content is the determining factor, but some are too sloppy to write, the “good food” to do bad. In all cases, more than half of the problems lie in the introductory phrases: or in violation of norms of writing, or illogical, or inaccurate sentences. In order to arouse people’s interest in improving the lead writing, we invited a senior editor Yan Jiansheng comrades in our magazine “pulse diagnosis ”Column open“ Please be the disease lead ”veins“ ”topic. The way is that each time he chooses a number of flawed leads announced, please come to “pulse diagnosis”: What are the problems? How to modify? Written after sent to us, to pay column host commentary, and then select the best published. This issue of the disease guide has the following four: